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@Farris
Very nice, as usual. There are a few typos or spelling mistakes (*worriyng, *problably, *unralated).
last fluctuations => latest fluctuations. "Last" is grammatically correct, but it means like the very last and final, not the most recent one.
he found them lacking => hmm, not sure what you are trying to say. To lack (to miss something) usually goes with an object.
@Captain Vari
This one is a bit difficult to follow for me, there are quite a few issues with vocabulary and spelling. My suggestion is do not try to translate the text from Spanish, as the result has issues with grammar and word order, specially verbs and prepositions. At some point, the text changes from "he" to "I" which is also annoying for the reader. Keep it simple, and keep practicing!